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Hello, six chapters of my novel have been published so far. I'd love to hear your opinions on them, guys. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1645348/heavenly-demon-ascending/

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I am interested in your opinion too. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1326026/rise-of-the-demonic-emperor-absolute-domination/

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Why is the beginning so general? It is true that incarnation is general to everyone, but incarnation in a novel you are reading, and in addition to that, as the hero of the novel, it is not general, I think. Even when incarnated in a novel that you know in other stories, he is often like the...

Here is the beginning of my first chapter that I edited. Give me your opinions on it, and how much you think I should make Lin Fan take the time to Assimilate, since I don't know how to edit the text to make it fit the context. I want honest opinions. Chapter 1: In the Forest of Magical...

I made the protagonist reincarnate into his favorite novel as the hero of the story, but he will follow a completely different path. He will be very evil, not just a selfish person concerned with his own interests, but someone who will do anything, without caring about morals, to get what he...

Here are some amendments to the first chapter, for those who want to give me their opinion on them, whether they are better, and how I can improve them further. Chapter 1: In the Forest of Magical Beasts, deep inside a small, dark cave, a young man with messy black hair and a handsome face...

I understand, but it's hard to wait a long time. I'm excited to edit this so it's better, as this novel is not only a future source of money for me, but I'm having fun writing it, and I really like the feeling of constantly improving at the thing I love. Therefore, I hope that I have not...

Well I will try to work this

What do you think about this? The text without modification: Lin Fan froze for a moment, his thoughts racing as he tried to make sense of the situation—something he had always thought impossible: transmigrating into a novel! Text after modification: Lin Fan froze slightly in place as he...

Thank you for your completely honest opinion. On the contrary, it doesn’t hurt me — it guides me, so thank you. I’m still a beginner, having started writing only about a month ago, so all your feedback matters to me and helps me improve. I only responded harshly to the first comment from...

Thanks for your opinion

Yes, of course. Thank you for your feedback, and I will try to improve what you mentioned (except for Lin Fan’s character, as I honestly like his like that) ?? Can you give me your name on Discord? I want to send you a friend request if this doesn't bother you

I somewhat agree with some of the points you made. I do need to improve certain aspects, especially making the other characters feel more realistic rather than just puppets submissive to Lin Fan, and this is something I am working on. However, what you said goes far beyond constructive...