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    Switched POV for my Prologue on my WN need feedback

    (It isnt on this site I'm just here because it's more active) (PS you dont have to read the whole thing just a bit and then scroll down and the fixed version is also here) I originally wrote my story in first person POV and it led to bad pacing, bad internal monologue, unreadable text, and no...
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    Check out my story Re: Sei

    Arc 1- Alaric Thorne, A boy who attempted suicide took his own life to escape an absurd world, only to encounter a cruel and sadistic goddess. She regards both humans and gods as characters in a book, capriciously toying with them and viewing them as beings whose stories can be rewritten at any...
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    HELLLPP

    I'm cookin hamburger and rice tonight
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    HELLLPP

    I'm abt to go start cookin dinner
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    HELLLPP

    Ok
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    HELLLPP

    fixed it I still figurin this whole UI out I didnt think it'd turn the damn text to a link oh yea I followed u btw
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    HELLLPP

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2173249/re-sei/ this is mine if u wanna check it out tho
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    HELLLPP

    that ur story?
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    HELLLPP

    I be playin music in my headphones at 2 am writing a chapter and it be dark af and my mom or the dog pops up like fukin dracula and my soul goes on vacation ?
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    HELLLPP

    also this app df has a better community cuz i dont see a fourems tab on RR and i got 600 views with only 2 followers almost all were ghost readers cuz they always came and checked on it but never gave feedback to help me improve my writing is it worse than discord scams ?
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    HELLLPP

    this app pretty chill tho ngl
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    HELLLPP

    my only review on rr is a friend who wanted to boost me on the algorithm the villain is the cause he is doin it to get the perfect day because hes pride he wants everything to go his way he is a perfectionist
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    HELLLPP

    also i've noticed I got a review that was actually supportive within my first few chapters, still aint gotten on royal road
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    HELLLPP

    the whole story starts with the mc killin himself and meeting a meta author goddess who views ppl as ink to be rewritten on a whim shes the overall main villain
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