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After reading your comprehensive feedback, I can say your answer is... Thank you for this excellent feedback. It gives me the...

For her age, the fact that she genders the river, the sun, the dog, and constantly repeats her name while not understanding death...

Dang, that's great character's POV subtext. It's very clear and pointed out to the plot subtext. It would be great to see from her...

This is nobledark, or rather, grim's fairy tale. A dark fantasy seen from a child's perspective.

I feel like she's around four or five years old... let's make her four and a half. Reason I say that is because of her being old enough...

Oh shit, what i understand about this, is it some kind of grimdark fantasy? The way she describe the 'Mr.Dog' dancing after her mom...

Well, if what I provided is correct Long lines like these can be divided and shortened to give her a more childlike personality. Like--...

Her actual age is a secret. But the age range you provided is correct.

What is her exact age? Because a few lines(very few) feel a little mechanical for her age(since the whole chapter is in her pov).

Thank for your feedback. Caelan is indeed a little girl (not a reincarnated immortal). I asked her age to gauge how accurately Caelan's...

1. I feel like Caelan El Rose is around 5-9 years old, unless she is some weird immortal being that is trapped in eternal youth. 2. I...

Hello! Keep in mind, I'm not a very good writer, so take any of my advice with a bag of salt. With that out of the way: Just ditch the...

Feedback for A Little Daughter Character Well, I rewrote one of my chapters with the first POV from a little girl's perspective. Here...

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There are actually many criticisms I could make. But now I disike to burden authors with too many demands. I prefer to suggest the most...