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Okay, is that the only problem you found? Or do I have to fix something else too? Thanks for replying.

As someone said, my chapter 1 sucked. It had a soulless MC. My synopsis was also misleading. So, I've revised it and rewritten my...

Dude... after reading chapter 1 once, I noticed your narrative has a sudden POV shift problem that makes it prone to head hopping...

Yeah, Ikr. What are you doing here? I see. I see. Well, I'm certainly not any celebrity. 15K sounds way too long-nyah. Yes... That's...

I don't know if this thread is ongoing or not. But can I ask you to roast my work too? It is in my signature. It is better if you just...

Do it, so I'll know if I'm just wasting my time doing this. Thanks for your time for giving feedback...

I don't know but I had the itch to be roasted. And, your reviews are genuine which I want...

One sentence roasts for the webnovels I skipped. I wanted to write some constructive "roast" for you, but given that it's basic The...

Do you like Warhammer? Because there "orks" are also spelled with k. Otherwise, you'd spell them with a c. So he is this noble...

You should use content warning tags more wisely. If your fiction doesn't contain explicit sexual scenes, there's no need to include a...

How am I lying ? I said there are not sex scenes, the tag is not limited to just that. Sexual content can include other things than just...

Dude... don't lie. In "content warning", your fiction clearly contains sexual content. Why do you claim otherwise?

Yes. Many readers will skip it, even if it is very well written. Better to split it into 2K or 3K chapters.

It seems we need to redefine text in images and images containing text.

1. There's a lot of telling instead of showing here. Like, a lot. You could give some kind of example, like your character trying and...