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yes. when you hit on *just* the right word, its very satisfying.

@TinaMigarlo Thank you Tina, really! I do like vast vocabularies, because some words had better tones on prose.

For me, I "noticed" you and you stood out from the crowd when... you were being "reviewed" and you were criticized for being too...

what work. That's less than an hour out of someone's day. I write 7k chapters, lol.

Yeah! My first draft actually doing that, but whenever I re-read again I couldn't feel the emotional tension, and ended up make it to 4...

Hmm... maybe this question is more appropriate to ask loyal readers who have already invested 24 chapters, dude. Or if you're also...

Yeah, i get what you mean. To be honest, I wanted to share the whole memory logs from chapter 22 until 25, to picture what truly happen...

Hmm... I might be lacking context, dude. I might understand the protagonist's feelings a little bit. But I don't feel the betrayal...

Betrayal and Regret to be precise.

Ah yes, that was intended actually. May I know, is it hard to visualize the action scene or the emotions too? Thank you so much for...

first off, for someone who "speaks" in these forums with an accent... your 'accent' sure disappears quick when you write. very good...

Hmm...I feel like the pacing is slightly off. I feel like the first scene is too slow and the second is too fast. I'm having trouble...

Hi, I need your opinion about this emotional scene I made. Can you capture the emotion? Or is it too flat? Or maybe it's too fast? The...

you need to wait, it's under review friend.

Oh, it was the same guy who DM me few days ago. I didn't accept it thou, since I was too lazy set up that kind of stuff :sweat_smile...