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I think it's pretty clear and straight forward. The superheroes are immune to that Typopvirus that originate from Ox Empire. Sadly the...

Thank you for the advice. I'm still trying to make the story's point right now. To be honest, I was inspired by your work at MENTOR...

I'll read the first chapter of your story. I'm a better reader than a writer, so my points will be focused on how it made me feel than a...

If you want, you can DM me, i'll try give you my honest opinion regarding it.

Yes, it's a straight relationship.

Tbh, i don't really get it. What kind of tension you want to seek from those narrative? Excitement? Or Dreadful feeling?

Well, what i mean wasn't that kind of tense scene, more like romantic tension between the characters :sweat_smile: Would you mind...

I can help you with my opinion if either i grasp the tension or not.

What level of spicy are we talking? Like romantic sex scene that is heavy on euphemism?

Yeah, something like that. Just necessary context thou. So you'll know which point of your story will suitable as a hook. But, i'll...

Wow dude, when @Eldoria said your narrative neat that's mean your style is good. Perhaps, try to create story ideas first how it will...

I try to write my own story, the title will be "Battle Mage". Please give me your feedback about this prologue I made, maybe about the...

Well, in terms of storytelling, your narrative is quite solid. You apply the principle of "show it, don't tell it" quite well. This...

Well, I did it actually, well for me, it was sad moment. It was MC's 2 disciples, who actually love each others.

My opinion will be, If the work represent the author's genuine ideas or imagination. If the effort come from stealing or duplicating or...