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*Your synopsis could use less details. Most readers would get confused from the extra details like the lobster and the ruins his son built. *Also make the synopsis concise, big synopsis usually don't work well. *Also add a cover picture for your novel. *I know it is not the genre but adding a...

You can message me here. Thank you in advance and sorry for the late reply. I am a new writer so don't expect much. I'll help give you some feedback but which of yours story do you want me read?

Thank you for giving your precious time. *Info dump is definitely a problem I need to work on. *I will try to decrease the monologues, thanks I did not notice how excess it was. *As for consequences well, the story is just starting. *Tension hmm i will work on that. *people might not like side...

I have no problem with that. I'd be happy you critique my work.

Please give me your real feedback then I am ready for it but please be civil here. I have a very fragile ego.

When you write for hours and someone says 'disregard this entirely' anyone would get angry. I asked for feedback not a roast. The white desert is supposed to show a blank canvas where mc writes his destiny with his choice. The name sounds awkward but the mc is german

Dialogues and characters

I will add that part. Thank you! Now please give me some constructive feedback. Could you spare some of your time to answer my original questions. Give me some feedback please.

As I said english is my second language. I used ai to fix grammer and spelling for the novel. Please read just one full chapter before jumping to conclusion.

I can see your sarcasm. But read the work first. Otherwise you are clearly a troll.

I did grammer check at best. It isnt written by Ai as you said. You are just disregarding my hours of work to Ai slop. "Disregard this entirely" really dude?

I used no Ai to write my story. You can try reading it once before commenting something like that.

Hello, dear senior authors, I’m a new writer just starting out, and I’d really appreciate any kind of feedback; good, bad, or in between. I’m not asking for much, just a few honest thoughts on what I might be doing right and where I’m going wrong. I’ve tried posting in the feedback section...

Hey! This is my first time writing a story, so I’d really appreciate any feedback or ideas you think I should add. I’ve got the general plot planned out and already wrote a rough version. Just wondering if there’s anything important I should keep in mind while writing, or anything else I should...