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    How to make friends?

    :blob_no::blob_no::blob_no: I also want to make friend...
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    Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods

    ah yes Lord of Mysteries propaganda
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    Have you ever thought, “What if my story never gets popular?”

    I'm gonna feel worthless, depressed, sad, and sleep.
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    Fair. I'm gonna change it. I did forget I use that account to push my works, tehee xD Thanks!

    Fair. I'm gonna change it. I did forget I use that account to push my works, tehee xD Thanks!
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    yes it's me. but thanks for asking, I appreciate it

    yes it's me. but thanks for asking, I appreciate it
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    What's wrong?

    that is the one you know. you just assume all people like you. not everyone laughting. each people are different, each country and culture are different. just because you know some guys doesnt mean you know all of them. tbh, i feel hurt when watching it. get hit two times in my childhood. it...
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    [For Hire] Accepting SFW / NSFW commissions (no limit)

    writing comm? 10$ each 1k words? wow writing musy be a popular profession then! I should change my job asap!
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    Best description of Flat chest?

    here is one from my chapter: the story was still in serious moment, and i can't write it too witty, which may make it feel too offensive.
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    Trilogy confusion

    yes 100%, gender bender is the king! the best of the best, the peak fiction! jk, you are the writer, just write what you like. do you write two of them simultaneously in the first place? you still have 280 chapters left to worry about that. it's strange that two are parody, and one is...
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    Writing Help me fix my bad writing style

    Your problem is not from "one-liner paragraph style". I also use it in my story, and no one has said anything about it thus far. Your problem lies in too much exposition and dry writing. Also, choose when to use and when not to use them. You don't need to strictly only use "one line." You can...
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    Writing Help me fix my bad writing style

    idk how to advise, but here is some nitpicks and me if I'm the one writing this: Inside the grand library of Ravenshade mansion, a young boy was sitting leisurely in his chair. He was tall enough to be mistaken for a ten-year-old boy, even if he was only eight. His deep jet black hair was now...
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    Recommendations Recommend me some SH books to read! (Round 2)

    Read my story, please :3. It mainly about mystery and action, but it has comedy. No romance for now though. Romance might go with side characters later. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1793994/isidoras-theatre-of-dolls-painted-girl-progression/ (if you do read pls dont mind c39, i intend to...
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    Dream Ass

    damn this is so weird and so amazing at the same time. it's a pity Dream Ass died of ligma.
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    Why Isekai?

    This is quite controversial topic, because not all isekai work like that. Sometimes, it mark a new beginning for mc, so mc could study from the past mistake and move on his/her new life. (Musoku tensei). Let's said in the old world, you cant move on because many thing linger with you there...
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