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    New writer looking for some feedback

    Yes, that's very good advice. Maybe it becomes easier the longer you write (embracing the cringe part), or just maybe you get used to it as a natural part of life, like you said. Thank you very much for your kind message!
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    New writer looking for some feedback

    Hello! Thank you for your feedback, regardless! I was afraid it was too slow. I also tend to favour descriptions over dialogue (I don't know how to write that without thinking it sounds cringe :biggrin_s:), but yeah, I'll try to introduce the plot in a more alert way. Thank you for your time!
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    New writer looking for some feedback

    Hello everyone. I started writing my first novel ever, but I don't dare to let anyone read it in real life, so I came here to beg strangers :LOL: Please keep in mind that it's a BL, Omegaverse novel (no smut), so yeah, there's that. Anyway, a big thank you to anyone willing to give me a bit of...
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