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MFontana reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with
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Not really sure - the LNs I've listened to were all translations. It seems that, the method of translation does make it SEEM like they... -
MFontana reacted to Author_Riceball's post in the thread Make a generic CN synopsis of your story! with Like.
I’m having a stroke reading this
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Like.
Well, I ignored your misplaced thread. This time I answer on behalf of causal readers of LN. My short answer... LN fans like telling...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Like.
If that's the case, that's good enough. It's not that I hate telling... I just don't like narratives that tell so much that emotions...
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MFontana replied to the thread What do you think of this character introduction?.Thank you both for the input. The actions are coming soon enough, and I do have a clear mental picture of how to incorporate them into...
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MFontana reacted to K_Nishi's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
The villainous intent definitely comes through, so your direction is clear. At the moment, though, he feels somewhat archetypal — a...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
Honestly, the first four sentences are descriptive narrative that slows down the pacing and isn't suitable for character (villain)...
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MFontana reacted to LilythGeist's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Wow.
So... On my end there would be two options: Maximilian Löwe - an actual Nazi that was isekaied to Dwynevia Kojiro Yamaoka - a serial...
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MFontana replied to the thread What do you think of this character introduction?.I figured that was easy to infer with the mention of his smirk, but a bit more clarity probably couldn't hurt. I appreciate the input...
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MFontana reacted to Tsuru's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Like.
Same. Why the heck everyone that create this kind of great idea thread most always do the [.....that you wrote] part........ Its like...
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MFontana replied to the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?).Good news, El. An Anti-Villain is still qualifies as a type of villain, so they are still a "Villain" here. The only true difference...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Like.
Honestly... I wanted to answer Pain (Uzumaki Nagato) but when I looked at the thread's question about the most memorable villain, not...
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MFontana reacted to LuoirM's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Like.
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MFontana reacted to Playerkartik's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Like.
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MFontana reacted to Rookieqw's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
Hi! Keep in mind, I'm not a very good author, so avoid trusting my suggestions. So, here's the first thing: No need to mention orc...