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MFontana reacted to K_Nishi's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with
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The operatic mask works visually, but I wonder if some readers might momentarily struggle to picture how much of his face is visible... -
MFontana reacted to Omarfaruq's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Like.
For me, my most memorable villain would be the Grey Clock from the Empire. I was making him just for fun, to create some obstacles for...
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MFontana reacted to Placeholder's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Like.
> Is there any JP Light Novel readers here? I've read vast quantities of webnovels in translation at syosetu.com and kakuyomu.jp. I...
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MFontana reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
When you said, this Lithe is villain, the contrast of his graceful appearance clearly memorable. Only because you said this is villain...
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MFontana replied to the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?.I do read a few Light Novel series as well. That said, the style isn't really more about "telling" or "showing", but rather the...
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MFontana reacted to Deleted member 44974's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Haha.
That's a weird way to say @Tabula_Rasa will report it to see what will happens.
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MFontana posted the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) in Discussions & Writing Tips.Seeing as how I've been working on the opening of Chapter 3 of Duskfall, and doing so introduces one of that series' main, recurring...
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MFontana replied to the thread Can a slow-burn military fantasy survive without an OP protagonist?.From what I can gather, you have yourself a clear target audience. So the advice I'd offer is this: Write for your target audience...
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MFontana reacted to SilentBlade's post in the thread Can a slow-burn military fantasy survive without an OP protagonist? with Like.
Hello everyone, I’m currently writing a military fantasy series that intentionally avoids common power-fantasy shortcuts. The story...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Can a slow-burn military fantasy survive without an OP protagonist? with Like.
Don't worry about the content of your story as long as the storytelling is good... readers can enjoy it.
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"Does your character have the same eye color as you? Bad author! Your character can't have the same eye color as 80% of the planet."
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Correct. We use the term "Mary Sue" in honor of the Star Trek fanfiction character that brought the trope to light. Before that...
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These quizzes ask the dumbest questions.
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Agree. Other questions are also biased, such as those regarding FMC's royalty background and special power. The problem is, royalty...
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MFontana reacted to PurpleXanmal's post in the thread How To Appeal for being falsely flagged AI? with Like.
I was actually fixed already!