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MFontana reacted to Deleted member 44974's post in the thread How To Appeal for being falsely flagged AI? with
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MFontana replied to the thread What do you think of this character introduction?.Not good at giving feedback? That seems pretty good to me. And yes, you definitely nailed it on this bit too. That's dead-on for his...
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MFontana reacted to Anemic_Vampire's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
I'm not really good at giving feedback, but here I go anyway... :blob_cookie: Honestly, standing beside the big ork, the elf-like...
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MFontana replied to the thread How to write previous relationships..Beat me to it... but here's the meme anyway. See the meme? Do the meme. You SHOW it through present-day interactions. Maybe have one...
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MFontana reacted to NapLovingImmortal's post in the thread How to write previous relationships. with Haha.
Thats the neat part. You dont.
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I played with your scene a bit; not sure whether the fiends and the bandits were supposed to be the same thing. I don't like the...
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My bad i should've mentioned that it is from a different character's pov that didn't see what happened. It was at the tail end of a...
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MFontana replied to the thread Story request (Fanfic).I believe there's been a misunderstanding of my intent, so allow me to clarify. I'm not making any suggestions regarding Voldemort on...
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Head cannon is that Voldemort is the tutorial fight in context with the story at large especially considering he's small potatoes...
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MFontana replied to the thread Feedback on my action block..Okay, depending on what style you're writing for, and your target audience, my advice should be taken with a grain of salt. [My...
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MFontana reacted to VM_Belwynd's post in the thread Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story? with Like.
Thank you everyone for the advice, I will try to split it up into questions and answers more.
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MFontana replied to the thread Do most visual novels suck?.As someone who has played more than my fair share of good ones (and trash ones), if you want a good feel for a Visual Novel, go with the...
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MFontana replied to the thread What's the smallest thing that could change your entire storyline?.The entire multiverse could collapse from a disruption in the balance between worlds, and the Elements, Life, and Death. If Morrigan...
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MFontana reacted to K_Nishi's post in the thread How can i write believable relationships. with Like.
The Principles of Food Theory in Storytelling In characterization, "Food Theory" suggests that a character's nature is revealed through...
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If it's the Underwater Forum I'm way ahead of you. *^^* I have been a user there since about 2000.
