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MFontana replied to the thread Aestelle Nocte - Discussion Thread.Chapter 3 of Aestelle Nocte just dropped. Check it out here: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/2051993-aestelle-nocte/chapter/2213807/... -
MFontana replied to the thread Writing How important are dialogue tags in your fiction?.1) They're very important, especially when you have multiple characters engaged in the conversation, and engaged in action...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Writing How important are dialogue tags in your fiction? with
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Using of Dialogue Tags in Fiction In dialogue, tags are often used to briefly identify characters. Dialogue tags like "Barry said..."... -
MFontana reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread How does your protagonist achieve peace? with Like.
hahah I can assure you I did not do that. Your cat offered me the information free of charge
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MFontana reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread How does your protagonist achieve peace? with Haha.
that fuzzy little prick.
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MFontana replied to the thread How does your protagonist achieve peace?.Ooo... that is a tough one. I'd need to define Peace for each of them separately. Then would need to address how he/she goes about...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread How does your protagonist achieve peace? with Like.
Peace in Fiction Achieving peace has become a cliché motivation in mainstream fiction. For example, in isekai fiction, the protagonist...
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MFontana replied to the thread Silent acceptance or vocal criticism--Which is better?.That depends entirely on the story, and your intent. (If you're writing a choose-your-own-adventure style series, you may want to...
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MFontana reacted to CountVanBadger's post in the thread Silent acceptance or vocal criticism--Which is better? with Like.
We all know that the vast majority of our readers aren't going to leave comments, no matter what site we're on. They're happy to just...
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MFontana reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Silent acceptance or vocal criticism--Which is better? with Like.
Disney is a good example of what happens when they listen to the loudest.
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MFontana reacted to treze's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Book/Series Title: Dream Dungeon Genre: LitRPG Link: Dream Dungeon Type of Feedback Requested: Targeted Critque - Need feedback on...
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The internet is already a fast-paced, impatient environment in the first place. Mix that with the fact that a lot of people lack media...
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MFontana reacted to jean-marc21's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Hello, I read your thread and I'm interested in your offer for serious critique. I understand you have a specific format, so here are...