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Yeah theres issue with grade inflation as well. Most people are going to click a 5* as a way of saying 'nice job', so anything below...

Personally, I think it should be mandatory to leave comments with 1 or 5 star reviews. 2-4 can go silently but not the extremes. I...

Words right out of my mouth.

I appreciate the effort and detail you put into answering this feedback request, @FRWriter, personally I didn't feel you owed any...

As an apology for my low effort comments, I've really taken my time and analysed this as best as I can. I hope it helps. Man, I used...

Thank you very much, El. That truly helps quite a bit. I've done some polishing already and came to something that I think will deliver...

Does it deliver the hook well? Well, I'm quite curious about how Tobias will hide the mysterious woman. And yes, the synopsis has a...

Any form of artistic expression can be good. It comes down to the execution of the work, as well as the skill, and talent, of the...

No, it is possible. 100 Girlfriends is a good example of a harem done right

you cannot write good harem. you have much to learn still

Oh, I won't. I physically can't really since I have such a desire to add personality to characters

The calendar thing is a way of saying what the date of the first contact is by the calendar we use here on earth, rather than the...

Honestly... I enjoyed it more and was more likely to imagine the direction of the story if the synopsis started from 3rd paragraph ...

It seems to outline the content and give a good impression of what is to come in the story, which is good. That way, readers know what...

Does it deliver the hook well? It is okay. I feel I have already seen similar setups before, but something is missing for the 'hook' in...