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MFontana replied to the thread Writing trash for fun.Kind of. I guess. Well... No. Not really. For me, I guess it would be 'trash', but when I really sit and think about it, it isn't... -
MFontana replied to the thread Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy.Well, you've got me there. That certainly is one way to feel better about your own stuff. Just don't let yourself pick up any of those...
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MFontana reacted to MakBow's post in the thread Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy with
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I don't think you are lazy. I just said lazy as click bait. And yes, I am fully aware that of both good and bad ones (100 Girlfriends I... -
I've finally gotten around to drafting up the (actual) blurb/synopsis for Aestelle Nocte, but would like a bit of feedback on it before...
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My speech teacher taught me to read out loud following these rules: A comma: half breath. Period: one full breath. This affects my...
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I'm in love with the comma okay!
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MFontana replied to the thread How to write a good synopsis?.There's two more elements to consider. The When and Where of the story. These quickly provide setup for the setting of the narrative...
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I agree with other respondents that a good synopsis should have a hook. Furthermore, a synopsis should make the reader care about your...
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Wait wait wait, I got it! In a world where... no no no! He was just your average guy when... no! She wasn't just any... no wait...
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MFontana reacted to LastMinami's post in the thread Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy with Haha.
Yes... It's called work. Easy, honest, and profitable lol. If you think about it and take away the "honest," it's like being a...
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MFontana reacted to Hans.Trondheim's post in the thread Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy with Like.
I'm still writing serious harem stories coz I love doing it. Serious as in trying to make them act and feel like 'real' people, using...
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MFontana replied to the thread Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy.It's already been said, but there are a lot of traps, and they are very easy to fall into. Especially with the badly-written ones. It is...
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MFontana reacted to Anonjohn20's post in the thread Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy with Like.
There are multiple traps that a harem story can fall into. Trap 1: Too many love interests. Or some of the love interests not being...
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MFontana reacted to MakBow's post in the thread Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy with Haha.
I'll say it: Harems are the easiest thing to write, the authors who write them are just lazy. I mean COME ON! Free characters! With no...
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MFontana reacted to mythosandmagic's post in the thread Is 5k words too much for the first chapter? with Like.
Length isn’t the issue. Engagement is. A 5k chapter that builds tension or emotional investment will keep readers engaged. A 2k info...