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MFontana replied to the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)].Targeted critiques are actually a lot less work than a full critique (Even if I have to do a bit more reading for some of them), because... -
MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with
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Dude... do you accept a request for targeted, in-depth, and focused feedback? I'd like feedback that focuses on one aspect of the... -
Your a cool guy, Mike.
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MFontana reacted to c37's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
I guess it was removed? it is showing 404 @Daeron.
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Link is not found, dude
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MFontana reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
I already edit the link, it should be worked.
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MFontana reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Oh about time! I need your input about my new writing on Fantasy Genre! Book/Series Title: MERCILESS Genre: Grimdark Link: MERCILESS...
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MFontana reacted to c37's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Hey man, I would appreciate some old school criticism. Book/Series Title: B*stard of Abaddon. Genre: Dark-fantasy, action, adventure...
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MFontana posted the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] in Story Feedback.After a fair bit of consideration, I'm opting to open my own critiques thread for those who might be interested in getting thorough...
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MFontana replied to the thread Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods.This is a spectacularly well-designed blend between Hard and Soft systems, and makes for an interesting pantheon concept as well. ?
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MFontana reacted to MakBow's post in the thread Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods with Like.
So, I decided to create this power system for a mystery, steampunk, horror, fantasy story I intend to make since I want to tackle the...
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MFontana reacted to Cookiez_N_Potionz's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
Someone gave me advice about my grammar and than made a chapter of my Webnovel sound better. When I reread the improvements I was more...
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MFontana reacted to LastMinami's post in the thread How can i write believable relationships. with Like.
Use yourself as a reference, and your friends too. If you can't, watch anime or series. If that takes too long, play visual novels. If...