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Finished the Chapter 1 critique, and sent it (via private conversation). There's a lot there to digest and the forum thread just isn't...

Just wanted to thank all my readers for checking out my Webnovels. You didn't have to give me a chance, but you did and I'm forever...

Is it still in this thread? Because... by Trogdor, do not start with a wake up and daily routine scene. Please... It's... Just, no...

This chapter one makes a second critique that I've got on my plate to try and get typed up tonight. I could also see a lot of what El...

Haven't read any of the story yet, but do want to point out a few things real quick before I start. This: Isn't really doing you, or...

GSC? Oh, yeah! Watched and even translated! I really love that one! Btw ep. 6 & 7 are out now I wouldn´t say it´s cruel. It´s just...

Read the first chapter, and will try to type up the critique on it later tonight if I'm feeling up for it. Been doing a bit better today...

Initially made me think of Gunsmith Cats from the description. You did manage to sell me on Black Lagoon though, as it was a solid...

Gunslinger Girls?

Not exactly, but the is some level of influence. Gunslinger Gilrs, Black Lagoon, Jormungand, Lycoreco

I have completed my very first story. The tone is similar to "Girls with guns" anime from 20 years ago era. It is a dark urban action...

I smell LITrpg coming out of this one. Call it a hunch. Me? I rolled up a decent character for my life. But it seems WIS was my dump stat.

Yikes, get better Mike! ❤️

Alright. I'll put it at the top of my list for when I'm feeling better. Sick w/ Covid atm.

Just general feedback