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MFontana replied to the thread Would you read this once I post it?.Overall, no. But this is mostly a matter of personal genre preferences than a matter of the story premise, or whether it intrigues me or... -
So, at the moment, as I write my active novel, the one I'm posting currently, on the side, I write novel I haven't posted, mainly there...
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Like most ideas, its all in the execution
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MFontana replied to the thread What are your thoughts on this?.It's good, in concept, but without seeing the execution I can't really give you any solid, or worthwhile, feedback. You've got a lot of...
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So, basically in my novel. I have this idea that I'll have the MC's love interest be brought back, but as someone different, with some...
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MFontana replied to the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers?.Between them both, this one is significantly better in terms of literary, and descriptive, quality as compared to the latter example...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with
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Character Introduction Given two character introduction scenes with the same biodata and different narrative delivery below: Scene 1... -
MFontana reacted to Tsuru's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Love.
Scene1. Scene2 feels like a poem. >Harry stood straight. He wore dark robes. His glasses were clear. His hair was black. I read that in...
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MFontana reacted to CinnaSloth's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
Number 1. Easily better than 2 no contest. The only thing I would change from: remove the quotes from fireball, unless Harry is also...
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MFontana reacted to Jerynboe's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
Honestly both of them are moving too fast imo without other context if this is literally the first time we see Harry, but I prefer the...
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Hmm, I mark them for a few reasons, and now I have recently changed my marking scheme As my story isn't all about the smut, I put...
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MFontana replied to the thread Aestelle Nocte - Chapter 3 Poll [Which chapter opening do you prefer?].Thanks for your vote, El. There's still plenty of time for more votes, but as it stands (right now) the Lance opening is in the lead...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Aestelle Nocte - Chapter 3 Poll [Which chapter opening do you prefer?] with Like.
I prefer opening chapter, "Lance", because it creates a subtle tension as soon as the door opens that makes the reader feel like...
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MFontana replied to the thread When did you start writing?.A few lifetimes ago. (Not literally; that'd be closer to 1996 in the summer.). I started writing creatively back in middle-school...
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As the title suggests: when did you start writing? (I'm not asking about when you started posting your novel tho) For me, I started...