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MFontana reacted to Story_Marc's post in the thread Why A Lot Of Writing Advice Fails Writers with
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Actually, I've been thinking a LOT on critique and working something out for that. I'm just... not done yet. :LOL: But next week will be... -
MFontana posted the thread Aestelle Nocte - Chapter 3 Poll [Which chapter opening do you prefer?] in Latest Chapter Discussion.Alright, I've finished up the quick rough drafts for the two most popular answers from Chapter 2's question ["Who is at the door?"]. All...
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MFontana replied to the thread Why A Lot Of Writing Advice Fails Writers.Very well said, exceptionally well-presented, and spot on for identifying the problem itself. I'm sure most (if not all) of us have been...
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MFontana reacted to Story_Marc's post in the thread Why A Lot Of Writing Advice Fails Writers with Love.
This is something I've thought about a lot, when watching writing advice, considering own stuff done in the past, and just... well, this...
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MFontana reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread Why A Lot Of Writing Advice Fails Writers with Like.
I agree with the concept. "the first chapter or intro, needs to be punchy" the best you can drag out of them, is that it needs to be...
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MFontana reacted to Rachel_Leia_Cole's post in the thread Why A Lot Of Writing Advice Fails Writers with Like.
I wanted to write a “punchy” first chapter, but it didn’t serve my story overall. It’s a slow burn epic fantasy story, a multi book...
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MFontana reacted to melchi's post in the thread Why A Lot Of Writing Advice Fails Writers with Like.
Nah not AI IMO, Marc makes scripts in an academic writing style. I asked co-pilot to make an essay called "Why writing advice Often...
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MFontana reacted to Macha's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Haha.
You can thanks the two published authors you quoted for their feedback by buying their books from Amazon.
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
Your feedback is very detailed and technical. I appreciate your criticism and suggestions, especially regarding the choreography and...
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MFontana replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.Under the lens of what you're aiming for El, this bit is exceptional. You're hitting all of the beats you're after to build visual...
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MFontana reacted to Macha's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Wow.
You will find his feedback constructive. This is because him and M.G Driver is the same being.
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MFontana replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.It's no trouble, El. Really. I've got about four hours to kill in the morning, so reading and critiquing for you is a fine way to spend...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
I appreciate your attention. I probably don't want to be too much of a bother here. So, I'll ask for a one-time read for ease of...
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MFontana reacted to OtherSlater's post in the thread What's your biggest strength as a writer? with Like.
People say I write very cinematic, and that's because I very much picture EVERYTHING in my head, and try my best to describe it.