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Hello, this is mine, if you don't mind! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2235188/undo-her/

Improving vocabulary will be a slow process. Read, in particular professionally published books. In the US, library cards are free...

I'm probably going to be the only downer here, but: Why do you even want to write in the first place? :blob_cookie: You say you can't...

My recommendation, perhaps a little contrary to the "Just Write"isms around here, is to read! Reading good literature should inspire you...

He built a great sand castle I think.

Maybe Undo Her? Chapters are very long, and a new one drops tomorrow! It'll definitely give you some hundred pages of themes while you...

My source is also being a native Spanish speaker writing in English. It's unfortunately really hard to get a work to be 'written right'...

I thought of posting my stories there, but I prefer my stuff woke. After the reddit story of how the admins are anti lgbt because "no...

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed some of the descriptions, or at least, until ... ... they dragged a little too long! That is...

Tomato? :blob_cookie: I actually read not the entire Prologue, but around 1/3 or 1/4 of it. I felt it was indeed written well in...

I think a statistical approach is better than basing yourself on logic. Maybe try the time switch and see if it changes anything in your...

Theres quite the amount of long dashes, which is like a huuuuuuge giveaway for ai. Im not saying this is ai. But. Well.

Get it twisted, if any paragraph is longer than one sentence it WON'T be read ‼️

Keep in mind the average reader is dumb, and a story might get disliked simply because it dumps too many words at them all at once, or...

Mother Earth's Plantasia, Disco Elysium's OST, 2003 Toyota Corolla, and anything by Macabre Plaza are my instrumental-only...