LuoirM

LuoirM

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  • LuoirM
    I might be a bit of a self-glazer, but I just read through 14 different Translation tests for my VI - ENG group anh gotta say. My attempt at the test back in Dec 2013 was way better than these 14 people. They fall for the simplest of mistakes honestly.
    LuoirM
    I found this Vietnamese author doing free requests for samples. And I asked for a skinship shortfic between these two characters of mine who are twins (older female and younger male). After 2 weeks he/she gave me a snippet.

    They're kissing R16-ly, describing heat, taking off accessories and dry lips, tongue allat

    Now, I should be mad, but honestly, I'm more interested and howny so, let's go.
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    I just told them that these siblings love to hug each other and platonic forehead kisses when one sleep

    But apparently.................
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    But yeah, I enjoy it so I told them to push for lewd stuff and it's okay
    Nahrenne
    Nahrenne
    Huh.
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    That artist be kinky, then.
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    LuoirM
    The unarguable WORST type of hentai trope is a stupid/mentally immature woman being convinced into giving a handjob/blowjob all while asking "Am I helping you?" "What does this achieve?" "I'm glad I can help!" "What to do next"
    I'm kink-shaming, that shit is stupid and concerning, even worse than fan service 1000 years old loli.
    LuoirM
    "Whatever! You will pay for disrespecting me AND messing with my ear, what if you damaged my gold earrings? You don’t look like you can pay for these!”
    Ashrosaliera saw the perfect opportunity to mock Roshia and immediately hunched forward, raised her own elbows like chicken wings, and started flapping them exaggeratedly.
    “YoU WiLL PAy FOR DisrespeCtINg ME And MEssinG with My EAr, whAT If YoU dAmAgE mY gOLD EArRInGS”
    LuoirM
    My end-of-combat sequence

    Without answering, Alfred threw both the chakram with great force, making it spin towards one of each for the two of them, and they easily dodged it to the side.

    "Magic Spell: Tabernus Dei."

    Until he appeared right beside them with speed beyond their perception, with his sword sheathed onto the hips, he grabbed the two chakrams with both hands and slashed at them while dashing in the
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    he grabbed the two chakrams with both hands and slashed at them while dashing in the middle.

    Calipe reacted in time and dropped her entire weight, letting gravity pull her straight down to the ground, she fell into wet mud and immediately disappeared, camouflaging herself again.

    "ARGHHHH!"

    Mei wasn't so lucky, as she received a good slice across the arm when she barely managed to parry it with her staff..
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    The wound was still very deep, almost a third of her flesh was cut through and blood was spilling out.

    "Ele- Elemental Magic: Ice…" Mei gasped, her eyes widened in shock and pain, but still managed to aim her magic at Alfred who was standing right next to her.

    "Stop that."

    Alfred kicked Mei's staff away
    LuoirM
    Was writing and realize
    "He has natural long white hair" > Emphasize on White
    "He has naturally long white hair" > Emphasize on Long

    Fuck this language
    LuoirM
    Looking in Autumn, there will be Summer and Winter or Spring
    Looking around, people act as if you have no arms or legs
    It seems that the longer we meet, the more we become jealous
    And after a long discussion, we only see a dark, stupid sky
    LuoirM
    Kinky female are the most terrifying. Seriously, when a biological female has a "kink", 9 out of 10 times it's some horrid stuff that no male counterpart would even dare to imagine about. I just got requested to write a fic about uncle and niece incest, while I saw a friend getting into petplay, barking and stuff. And honestly that's hot ig.
    LuoirM
    And surely no one wants to see the bad and ugly
    So some journalists think the truth must be hidden away
    They publish to promote promiscuous prostitutes to distract from the gasoline and gold prices
    LuoirM
    We am the past, hoping that the pain will not recur in the future
    In these modern times, people have stuffed themselves into a phone
    Sometimes the long and sparsely writing means knowing that you are not satisfied
    But in theory, it is so that people will not regret giving you a few coins
    LuoirM
    One of my friends been living in agony for the last, idk, 5 to 10 years. Nothing works too get him going, he asked me to help him khs, should I
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    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Aight
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    Empress_Omnii
    Try getting them in contact with a suicide hotline. Only assist them in getting help and support, you can talk to them. But ask about their thoughts and feelings about suicide. Make sure they are not using drugs or alcohol. You can even remove dangerous items from their house to help, such as knives, guns, or drugs.
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    Empress_Omnii
    If they have attempted contact a emergency department. Either your local or regular emergency number is okay. Know that there is no harm in calling these lines if you think they have attempted. Again, if they have or do attempt, contact loved ones or other friends if they have any and tell them.
    LuoirM
    Bad April Fools so far

    Barely got 300 words in, decided to drop out of a class which I worked for like 6 months to saved up enough for but regretted. And there's school tomorrow which I don't have the energy to go but forced to cus last day is important
    LuoirM
    I had a dream last night where I'm young Luffy. But instead of Pirate I'm a power ranger, and instead of the One Piece world I'm in the crowded streets of Vietnam just running around in a skintight looking all dumb. But hey, Shank's crew does that too so.
    LuoirM
    Fellas, do you think my story got potential or just generic slop? Be honest

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    How To: Rank Up And Defeat Anything With A Flower

    When two hundred colossal obelisks rise overnight—each assigned to a nation—they open the gates to a single, shared dimension: [The Tower of Apocalypse] Humanity is forced to adapt as people awaken to powers and are chosen to climb. Among them is a young man who undergoes a radical [...
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    laccoff_mawning
    I'll say its a bit of a confusing read. I have no idea what's happening in the story, except it's set in Vietnam and there are dungeon-like things. Apart from that, nothing is really explained. It sounds like Tam dies in ch1, but he's alive in ch2? (word limit. making a second post)
    laccoff_mawning
    laccoff_mawning
    Then we have An and Mountain. "Mountain" suddenly becomes a psycopath halfway through chapter 1, and An starts acting like a psychopath in late ch2, and mountain disappears? It looks like An and mountain are the same people, but they're definitely different people in ch1.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Thank you I'll look into that
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