Recent content by Lufli

Thank you very much for the feedback. 🫂 Glad you still liked it.

Well, first of all, thank you for taking the time. I read the first 2 chapters of your story, and there's a lot to work on. I'm not sure whether you edit and revise your chapters at all; it doesn't seem so. You can start with punctuation and grammar, as others have already suggested. You gotta...

Hello, kind people. I'm currently writing a little story, but I'm not sure whether the direction I'm going in, both technically and storywise, is interesting, so that's what I want to hear from you as a subjective reader. If you want, you can also rate your enjoyment on a scale of 1 through 5...

Well, I don't really have a synopsis yet, so I'll just drop my first chapter here. Many thanks for considering my request. One thing I'm specifically looking for, if you even read to that point, is whether the 'name' of the protagonist in the second half comes off as edgy.

Hey. Do you also take single-chapter excerpts, since I haven't published any story yet?

A black hole?

You must be tired. Here, take a seat :coffee:🍪.

This might come somewhat late, but I saw that you can draw. So why don't you try to combine drawing and writing to publish a manhwa/comic or something similar? Or is the process harder than I am imagining?

As an arab, I can confirm this. However, people usually don’t directly kiss each other’s cheeks. Instead, they place their heads next to each other and kiss the air beside the face. Edit: It's very halal.

:blob_no::blob_no: I wanted it to connect to my other reply.

Is this real???

I feel like I can't properly rate this prologue. Lune seems to be a young man, but you occasionally mix his pronouns; sometimes it's his/him, other times it's her. Even though this is a technical issue, whenever it occurred, it pulled me out of immersion immediately because I had to question my...

Okay, man. Just do your thing. My intention wasn't to demotivate you. Good luck.

Yes, unfortunately. You see how this reply starts and ends with quotes? Additionally, the tone shifts strongly and punctuation and grammar are flawless. It's pretty unlikely that the author wrote this himself. I don't want to wrong anyone, I'm just sharing my impression. ✌️

That's respectable. I usually don't get myself involved either, but talking to a human should be the bare minimum. Even though it might be hard for this author to convey his emotions, he once stated that he didn't use AI to reply to others.