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Maybe just: He flinched when she grabbed his cast and held it up to the light, like she could see through it to see how the bone was healing.

As I write usually in first person POV, there's never been a real need to write death scenes. The thing is like since it's a different world, there's different rules in terms of death. And then there's their viewpoint of death, like will they struggle to the end, trying to stem their blood or...

Got Dropped into a Ghost Story, Still Gotta Work is a pretty good one, ranks high consistently on novelupdates, some others I would recommend is Deep Sea Embers, Diary of a Dead Wizard. There's a bunch that I forgot the name of.

Hmmm. Instead, how about all of the npcs are his memories in his past lives?

Just do it as mostly preparation. Make it hard to accumulate energy, so they resort to external means. Just remember, for extra fun, make sure something from nothing never happens.

Idle system cheat

Is the form swappable? If it isn't, then a long whip/chain sword can work for aoe and area control, especially if it's legendary weapons. If it can change, maybe a spear that swaps forms.

With your explanation, water would be liquids, earth would be solids, and fire would be plasma/energy. I would pick earth, as nothing can beat it. At most, it would be a tie. I don't know what setting you are talking in, like elemental magic, physics, disasters, eg. Also, what is it applying...

If I grouped it, (I'm replacing inner qi with spirit(mental energy), mana with energy) it would be kinda like this: Red: Strength, Constitution, Stamina Green: Dexterity, Perception, Spirit Blue: Intelligence, Wisdom, Energy/Mana Body: Strength, Constitution, Dexterity Mind: Perception...

Ahem. YES! TEACHER! I need some help with the B part... What does it mean to be proud of my work?

Ability: Wind Manipulation Balance: Frail body, takes damage when held captive

Milk it. The readers will naturally know pretty soon, but the MC should develop along with it. Just don't make the MC too oblivious as that will make people annoyed. Maybe get a scene in where the MC does that as well? Just to troll people.

Isn't there a bunch written in Japanese? Like the ones where the healer goes and takes revenge, self heals, creates miracle cures, carries the team, etc.? What's important isn't about how original it is. It's the writing. The setting can be the same, characters can be the same, but the actions...

A summary I feel is: quantity resulting in a qualitative change, purification, or unlocking

My vision is like -7.00 on both sides, no glasses makes anything past like 20cm away from my eyes as blurry. Anything small or thin is pretty hard to see, meaning a needle flying at me is invisible. But I can notice moving things easily.