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Probably been asked before, but how do you make dialog less scripted. I've done that "just say it out loud" stuff that others said, but...

They're definitely entertaining, but I don't wanna have small talk with Randy Orton.

Been working non stop to improve, but it seems like I hit a wall. Be honest with your criticism, but try not to be too harsh because I'm...

I appreciate you for the feedback. Spending most of my time either at work or learning to write has made me forget how a conversation is...

I'm okay with fragments usually, but I feel like you overused them a bit here. Like when you say The arena — the only place where his...

I’ll start off by saying I’m pretty terrible at writing children characters myself, so I can give you more advice based on how I felt...

If I messed up anything in my feedback or misunderstood anything, feel free to let me know: 1. I've cried at gaming montages with sad...

I feel like I’ve pretty much read most of your story based on how much of it you’ve posted in the forums. I’ll say that this is your...

Biggest thing I do is write where the jokes are supposed to go before hand, and just come back to work on them after I'm done with the...

I can't tell what timezones are on this site, but hopefully I'm not too late because It's an interesting idea. The 600 word limit was...

The goal was to rewrite the specific chapter that she linked in her original post. I'm pretty sure you just posted your own story. Are...

Do you mean chapter 10? Or are you releasing 11 soon?

Getting to you today. What specific chapter do you want me to read?

Really been distracted with writing, so sorry about how long this took/how little I actually said during this. The fact you only have...

This is most definitely my least clear one so far, so I'm sorry about this. Wrote this before work one day and bits during it the next...