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I actually really enjoyed this, even kind of expecting what would come by the end of the chapter. Classic “needs the money to pay for a...

I’m not going to start by pointing out all the small craft details to keep you from feeling overwhelmed, but the biggest problem I...

Feel like I didn't fully address what you asked feedback wise, sorry. This isn't meant to be a "your approach is wrong," but more so it...

I’ll lead off by saying I don’t really enjoy super emotionless characters (which the character came off to me as), so this is coming...

First, I want to say I needed more context just to give you a proper review, and because your chapters were so short overall, I went...

I went through three of yours since they were so short, and you had the decency to proofread it first. I'll get back to you once I get...

I'll read the first chapter of your story. I'm a better reader than a writer, so my points will be focused on how it made me feel than a...