Recent content by Hoshino

Goodnight sweet angel

See ya last commenters. And I'm winning-nya. I'm not going to come back so therefore even if you comment I'm winning

On the cover, the top text is a bit blurry. That’s all I’m going to point out, as it is a little appealing. And the synopsis is… well, okay. But there’s one thing I’m turned off by. Why would you add this, specifically the TBA ones? Anyway, moving on to the first chapter… And you already...

It keeps increasing... Okay, I'm going to do all there is now, and that's the end-nya.

What are talking about? Everyone is the same Person.

Ah. It won't end. When I finish writing one review, I think I can finally go and then there's another one-nya

I'll skip the cover and synopsis, and don't get me wrong, the synopsis is half decent, I’ll give you that, but most of it could be trimmed, or rather, it’s not really appealing to me that much. Like, there are thousands of other stories like this: an overpowered protagonist in a world full of...

The first thing I notice is that you have 53 chapters and yet somehow have no readers, which I suppose explains itself. The cover is hand-drawn; that is always good to see, but that’s not going to cut it if you want to gain any traction, which I don’t think you are with the synopsis you have...