Recent content by HeirOfGoat

I would give myself an 8/10 for the first chapter, then all my skills disappear and it becomes a 3/10.

Thanks a lot for the honest feedback, I really appreciate it! Do you think it would be better if I reworked Chapter 2, slowing the pace a bit like in the first chapter, and adding more of the mystery that connects them, or should I just keep moving forward with the next chapters and let the...

Hey everyone, I just posted the first chapters of my dark fantasy story When the Demon Child Dances with Death, which follows Rim a demon raised by a human assassin, caught between two worlds. I’d love to get some honest feedback: Did the opening catch your attention? How did the tone and...

I’d like to clarify a few things: I’m a young writer, just starting out, and I’m still experimenting a lot. One of my main goals with this story was to better understand how these platforms work, how readers respond, and most importantly to grow through feedback. I’m not here to seek attention...

Hey everyone, I just posted the first few chapters of my story, and I’d really love to get some honest feedback. What did you like? What didn’t work so well? Most importantly how did it make you feel while reading? Whether it’s about the characters, the tone, the pacing, or anything else, I’m...