Recent content by hastalavista

Thank you! I'm doing it as a hobby, but sometimes I want to feel recognized. I will take the patient path.

Hi As stated above. I have posted 21 chapters now. At first, I wasn't getting any readers until I changed the blurb. Now I'm getting some readers, about 24 readers, 11 plan to read, one paused, and two dropped. And I've got 11 really good ratings. But it's still very slow. Now, every two...

Thank you everyone! Your advices are really helpful and most of them were new to me. I'll put them to practice soon.

So I need your advice on two problems, My story had been reviewed a few days ago with a well informative review. I was told that I lacked so much in setting the scenes and visualization. Which for example was that I hadn't mentioned the use of smartphones until Ch7 so the readers had a vague...

It's true that japanese lighnovels are the ones that pulled me to writing, but I feel no dignity in their titles. Sometimes I feel like a dingle word is enough. For example, Berserk Amazing title. And it's so perfect with the story... But, it was made in the late 80s. Now the competition is so...

Lol that's so deep

Yea, The same here... It's so hard

Lol, really no problem. I will ask another quedtion later about how to writing with better language. So I will depend on you there.

Actually, I'm really seeing that your titles are very good and explains a lot. Thats why I thought of at least adding epic to my title, because the story turn to be an epic later on

Lol, I don't have a personal cover not just an editor.

Lol, the problem here is that Im really not good in writing erotica. Because my storage of words runs flat in this area

I even stay for hours thinking for each chapter title

Thats so good. Thanks!

Lol, the story is a tragedy

I'm still looking for that person. I found it on pinterest, and I even asked the one who posted it, but even her didnt know. And I'm sure that I'm going to change it if don't find the artist, because Im really thinking of buying it