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I find the fact you don’t have any backups at all besides whats posted extremely suspicious. You didn’t save one anywhere else?

The mouse isn’t as trigger happy as say the Japanese company that shall not be named that owns the IP for the red plumber the boy in the...

Dolores Umbridge is definitely up there. She’s evil but not kill babies evil. She’s institutional evil the evil that exists because of...

Write out your plot line in bulleted points try to clump them together into logical groups.

“Eyes are the windows to the soul.” Yakusu is right. Take your MC’s character traits do a deep dive on what colors mean in various...

Blue and gray

Honestly I think complaints about passive/active voice are bullish!t. I’ve been told by teachers and professors for years that I write...

Okay first off you need to change the name of the world. Avalorn? Seriously? I tried to type it in and autocorrect automatically changed...

Honestly not a bad idea but the not remembering anything is kinda a deal breaker. It could also be horror with someone remembering...

Not an author just a long time reader so my opinion might not hold the same weight. In my experience people who post more than one story...

Then I’d take a look at your writing before posting or get a proofreader or editor to read your stuff before posting it.

According to the internet the upper middle and lower dantian already exist in the bodies as the vessels which essence is taken and...

Honestly it looks great ?

I know some authors do commissions for some of their tiers like writing little side chapters from other characters perspectives that...

Most long term users, which is where your more dedicated fan base will pull from, have a policy of not latching onto stories that are...