Recent content by Gazzosa676

Sorry but in my experience, especially during summer, the only attire that allows me to obtain a certain degree of productivity is wearing exclusively underwear and a pair of slippers. Any other shape or form of fabric on my skin hinders my capacity of functioning properly.

Damn, I am always watching conspiracy icebergs and podcast about conspiracies and no cool one comes to my mind. There is this one that most of unexplained disappearances happen next to bushes of berries, so there is someone who believes there is a race of cryptid abductors who eat berries. But I...

The disaster situation. Something really catastrophic happens to which only the protagonist can help, so, for moral obligation, he has to stay or the school will be screwed. The semester ends, he is still in school, the brat still wants him to stay, so in the end he says "fuck the bet". If he...

Well, I am not having that problem with coming up with words that cut the use if adverbs (I am still too basic for that), but lately I am getting obsessed with words that are used for a specific thing that could be described with a more common name. Like, I am now writing a chapter that takes...

Well, if the novel is in the first person, it must be something that the protagonist is watching. So he could either describe what the enemy is doing while he studies him, or he could tell what the enemy is doing while he does his own thing. The MC could even tell what he thinks the enemy is...

My bad, here it is https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1169854/knights-of-ferlonia/

I wouldn’t know how to use it (as I don’t know how to use any other weapon), and I don’t think it would be possible to land it, but I’d say Metal gear’s HIND D, just for the hell of it

WOAH, a free review ? could come handy, since I have none. The story is attached in the signature. That’s a fantasy, and even if there is some SMUT, like I explain in the blurb, it’s not prominent at all.

Well, I’d rather not, and I usually pack my bag with books, videogames, and stuff, as I see that time as a opportunity to do things I don’t have time for in my everyday life. Though it can happen the aircraft is noisy and the passengers sitting next to me are annoying, and in the end I just look...

(Sorry for the typo) I think I know what you mean. When I beta read a text in Italian I noticed that sometimes a typo slips through, even if I was aiming at being as careful as possible, and I notice it only reading a second time, with a fresh mind. But I think this kind of autonomous mechanism...

I used to be a nerd so I always read all the assigned books. Except one. "Il Piacere" (the Pleasure (?)) by Gabriele D'annunzio. Man, that book is a garbage mound. A mockup of "The Picture of Dorian Gray" written by a dwarf with delusion of grandeur. Nice material for f*scists.

Personally I would need too much this kind of comments. Also for weird phrasing. I am not a native English speaker and I translate from my original language, so many oddities came out. I started uploading mainly to get this kind of feedback, but in any site I tried, this kind of feedback...