Recent content by ExtraTori

Yeah, I've heard that advice before somewhere. I forget where, but it seems to be one of the things people say a lot because it's true. I've enjoyed writing it, so far. I received a few comments early on, from the very few readers it attracted, and the first 4 chapters get more likes via...

The elf's age isn't like that of other series where they are tiny children at 17. Flor is, for all intents and purposes the same as you or I at age 17. Maybe, I'll explain that explicitly in like an author's note or something. I hope you enjoy the story as It's actually written. I think, I...

Thanks, for the honest feedback. I know it took some time to provide. I appreciate it. Yeah, I'm not a pro or anything. I'll see if I can work in some better scene transitions and/or atmospheric descriptions. I knew my writing had room for improvement. You're feedback gives me a direction for...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/708522/wicce-cambiare/ Looking for feedback on a lengthy story I've only just started. So, I'm new here. I wrote a couple of short one chapter stories before starting this one. I'm enjoying the process of writing it and will probably continue even if nobody...