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  1. ExtraTori

    Feedback Request

    Yeah, I've heard that advice before somewhere. I forget where, but it seems to be one of the things people say a lot because it's true. I've enjoyed writing it, so far. I received a few comments early on, from the very few readers it attracted, and the first 4 chapters get more likes via...
  2. ExtraTori

    Feedback Request

    The elf's age isn't like that of other series where they are tiny children at 17. Flor is, for all intents and purposes the same as you or I at age 17. Maybe, I'll explain that explicitly in like an author's note or something. I hope you enjoy the story as It's actually written. I think, I...
  3. ExtraTori

    Feedback Request

    Thanks, for the honest feedback. I know it took some time to provide. I appreciate it. Yeah, I'm not a pro or anything. I'll see if I can work in some better scene transitions and/or atmospheric descriptions. I knew my writing had room for improvement. You're feedback gives me a direction for...
  4. ExtraTori

    Feedback Request

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/708522/wicce-cambiare/ Looking for feedback on a lengthy story I've only just started. So, I'm new here. I wrote a couple of short one chapter stories before starting this one. I'm enjoying the process of writing it and will probably continue even if nobody...
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