Recent content by EverenVale

Depends on how important that character or place is. Sometimes, the character's name comes to mind the first time. Sometimes, it changes in every draft until I find the right one. But mostly, I used this website: Fantasy name generators It can even help you with finding names for your places...

Why can't I find the link to the story? I like reading stories with AI. Part of it is because people accused my stories of being AI stories. So I fast-read them to find out what the similarity is.

Thanks for your time and your feedback. Here is my feedback for your story: First of all, this story has the bones of something seriously special, a sort of Tokyo Revengers meets Death Note meets Mob Psycho 100, but filtered through a deeply introspective, ethically complex lens. You clearly...

Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you liked the story. Maybe I do need to change the synopses. I'll work on that. And I would gladly give you feedback on your story if you give me a link.

Thank you for your feedback. Here is mine for what you sent me: This is good. It’s dark, emotional, high-stakes, and full of that “spiral into madness and rebellion” energy that’s so compelling. You’ve got that delicate balance of poetic introspection and gritty urgency, and Yukou is a total...

Why not both? Why not a fantasy romance?:biggrin_s:

Interestingly, lots of people love having feedback, but no one is interested in giving feedback. This is a community, People. Or that's what I thought. So come on, send me your stories and I'll give you feedback on your first five chapters. And you'll do the same for me.

Hey Thanks for the offer. Feel free to read Relicborn in my signature. I can read your book if you want and give you feedback. Let me know if you're interested.

Glad to help. I can suggest that you finish your story and put it aside for a month. Then get back to it and read it on paper. Add quotes and comments on the side and then apply what you wrote digitally. The issue with rewriting immediately is that we don't see the flaws in our story unless...

Hey I read your prologue, and here is my review: I liked the story so far. But some repetitions make the story slow-paced so far. I get it, this is the prologue, but there are indications of forced marriage all over the story. I think one or two references could be enough; more than that makes...

Hey everyone I uploaded a stand-alone five-part story. I would be glad to receive your feedback. In exchange, I am willing to read your short story or the first five parts of any story written and give you feedback. Here is my story...

Thanks for the advice. I will check them out.

Thank you for your reply. I still have to research SH or AO3 to see what they are. But don't worry. That's my job. ? Oh wow. That was super helpful. I'll search for them. I have dozens of short LGBT+ stories and smuts that I wrote just to clear my head, and I thought maybe I could publish...

I read others' replies, and since no one mentioned it, here is what I can tell you. To improve your English, if you don't have anyone to talk to, use AI companions. I'm not talking about ChatGPT but actual companions. You can talk with them and ask them to correct your grammar if you said...

Hi I am Everen Vale, and I just completed my first story on this platform. The story has fourteen chapters and one bonus chapter for those who are interested. Chapters are short but packed with love, emotions, questions, and methodology. This is my first story on this platform. So let me...