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    Looking for feedback on my cover and blurb (Dystopian LitRPG)

    Thanks so much for the detailed feedback! Actually, I do use first-person POV in Resonance Law. It helps with the mystery and immersion aspect you mentioned. Great call on the Trigger Warning too. I'll add one. E.S.
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    Looking for feedback on my cover and blurb (Dystopian LitRPG)

    Hey everyone! I'm looking for honest feedback on my cover for my serial Resonance Law (dystopian LitRPG). Does the cover grab your attention when scrolling through new releases? All constructive criticism welcome brutal honesty appreciated !
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    Would You Keep Reading?

    Nice to hear it sounds interesting even if you usually don’t like LitRPG. If you ever try it, any feedback is super welcome. Thanks for taking a look ! Yeah, I see what you mean. That line makes it sound like I’m looking down on SH’s usual tastes instead of just describing the story. I’ve...
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    Would You Keep Reading?

    Ever wondered what it's like to live where your every move is tracked and scored? 10 chapters in. Dystopian surveillance city. LitRPG mechanics. Social credit nightmare. Does Resonance Law keep you reading or put you to sleep? Honest feedback wanted - the good, the bad, the ugly...
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