Thx, I'll see what I can do🙏🙏
I js revised the entire chapter, so feel free to read through it.
I read ur reply after editing so I mightve still made the mistake you pointed out
I have been posting for a month without any form of promotion coz of how I couldnt find a way to and only now found out abt forums💔
The story is slow burn and focuses alot on the characters.
It's mostly adventure and mystery, with some action🙏
Here is the story if you're interested...