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Eldoria replied to the thread Is this real or not?.Summon @CharlesEBrown
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I've recently made some revision to my story and would like for anyone who hasn't already to check it out. It's a mystery-driven...
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Eldoria reacted to greyblob's post in the thread [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with
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read up to: Chapter 9.2: The Promise the most egregious thing in this novel is the cover and your avatar. it has that low-quality ai... -
No. Game of Thrones is NOT high fantasy. It's drivel spiced with smut and half baked, by an author with less skills than Tommy Wiseau...
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@Hans.Trondheim did it again~! Much love!
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Eldoria reacted to Rosica's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Like.
And even if it is, nothing is stopping me from forcing you to reincarnate as an Englishman. You'll have to start over again from baby...
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Eldoria reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Like.
GREAT! Its really great to hear that you start early. Yes, you need to fix your prose that are very heavily AI-touched at the moment...
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Eldoria replied to the thread I'd like some feedback on my philosophical and slice-of-life story..After reading 2.5 chapters, I’ll be honest, dude. Your chapters have big ambition, but the execution still has weaknesses in narrative...
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Eldoria reacted to Rosica's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Wow.
...they're based. @Lloyd, 2022
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You're not thankful. You're gay.
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Eldoria reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Like.
We need a new category for AI story feedback. Seeing so many people give extensive feedback to AI stories always pisses me off...
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I took some days off from writing new content to significantly edit/reorganize my early chapters, and I'm happy I did. It was in the...