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Eldoria reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with
Haha.
Oh hiiii, its me agaain, Just wanna check if there's a long line waiting in here or not -
Eldoria reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
I guess I could phrase it more nicely like that.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].Wow.. this feedback is similar to my previous one. One reviewer's response may be biased... but if other reviewers confirm similar...
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Eldoria reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
I would like to start by saying I disliked the prose the moment I set eyes on it. Everything is overly dramatized to the point of being...
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500 readers I believe?
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Eldoria reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Like.
Honest feedback? Sure, since you asked. I didn’t read your chapter. I didn’t read your synopsis. I skimmed. My eyes trailed across a...
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I’m now a healthy person who cycles 14 km every weekday.
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Eldoria reacted to Rosica's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Haha.
At least make him relive his most depressing memories to make it more anime.
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Eldoria replied to the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated).The chapters are short, but the narrative clutter is too much. What casual reader would want to read two chapters just to watch MC stand...
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Eldoria reacted to Ararara's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Like.
Well, they were quite short chapters. :sweating_profusely: I'm willing to give most stories a shot
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Eldoria replied to the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated).You read 10 chapters for this kind of narrative?! Too crazy! :blob_pout:
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Eldoria reacted to Ararara's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Like.
well, it doesn't help that the first minute of reading has this pattern three times. it's the most famous/obvious ChatGPT pattern, the...
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@Eldoria new @AliceShiki alt you mean.
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Eldoria reacted to Rosica's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with Like.
They read like a single chapter split to three. More chapters can give you more exposure, but it won't help you get readers if the...