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Eldoria reacted to GiantFrog's post in the thread Rate my Novel: Finance/Thriller — From 43 Euros to Global Conspiracy [Poor to Rich] with
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Hey — thank you for this. Genuinely. This is the kind of feedback that costs the reader something to write and costs the author... -
Eldoria reacted to Kurayami's post in the thread What's the hardest part of being a writer to you, and what common writer woes don't make sense to you? with Like.
I am my own worst enemy. I get in my way a lot with writing, and I am harder on myself and writing quality than anyone can ever be. I...
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Indeed, the cutest girly!
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The Fanfics got demonetized, since it's a possible copyright issue on part of the website. The lack of prior notice for fanfic authors...
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You guys receive comments!? :blob_aww: :blob_popcorn:
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Because its cool #proud
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No offense taken, This is just habit of mine and i personally enjoyed onomatopeia for visualization guides Yes i know, this is like...
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The prologue chapter give me vibes that the characters live in a perfect world where imperfection is an offense punishable by execution...
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Then i strongly recommend you to shatter it more on the first chapter
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Eldoria replied to the thread Hook for My First Fantasy Romance Work.Thank you for your feedback. :blob_melt:
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Ok if may, 1. Unfortunately no. 2. Uhh not really. 3. Ugh, i can't really remember If i'm allowed to give the long answer: So you...
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Eldoria reacted to ThaddeusDeVilliers's post in the thread Hook for My First Fantasy Romance Work with Like.
And it could be that I am so suspicious of the whole "returning" I am no so invested at all in the main character's relationships... but...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Hook for My First Fantasy Romance Work.Thank you for your feedback. :blob_salute: :blob_melt:
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Eldoria reacted to ThaddeusDeVilliers's post in the thread Hook for My First Fantasy Romance Work with Like.
No Average if I read it straight as the story is presented Yes if there is a twist in Chapter 1 or if the Prologue's last line is...
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Eldoria reacted to Rosica's post in the thread [Review Swap] LitRPG / System Apocalypse (Rational MC, Exploits, No Harem) with Like.
Why don't your synopsis focus on those aspects? You don't need a what to expect section if you do your synopsis right.