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How is someone 7/20 black? how do we reach this fraction? this is not my cup of tea so i skimmed through the first 3 chapters. the... -
Eldoria reacted to greyblob's post in the thread [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with
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its been two years since the last one and two more since the one before. im getting the itch again. i'll provide a simple review of... -
Hey, I enjoy discovering the history of fictional worlds! But you are correct, there is no reason for that much history in the...
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Eldoria reacted to Madkins's post in the thread Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED] with Like.
That's what happens when you get a Sloth stoned
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Eldoria replied to the thread Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story.Well, I've read three of your chapters, dude. I've also read reviews of your work from other reviewers, both positive and negative. My...
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Eldoria reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED] with Haha.
Cause we're bored and decide to harass all the new people or sleeper agents that start activating and drawing attention to themselves...
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I wish I could be that savage with my feedback. To OP: You’ve showered your synopsis with adjectives and buzzwords that don’t earn...
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No one stopping me so another one, heights like everybody else. When I stand next to the window or balcony from third floor or higher my...
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Eldoria reacted to great_sloth's post in the thread Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED] with Haha.
Damn why is my feedback thread filled with veteran writers? How could I challenge my reviewing skills, lol.
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Eldoria reacted to GreenStudio's post in the thread Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED] with Like.
Yes, sensei!
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Eldoria reacted to TheKillingAlice's post in the thread Is this a good synopsis for my story? with Like.
Yeah... I'm once more going to be lazy about this: It's too complicated. If I have to concentrate my squirrel brain before your story...
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Eldoria reacted to SouthernMaiden's post in the thread Is this a good synopsis for my story? with Like.
Okay. My first thought was: LONG. Longer than any of the synopsis from most of the books on my shelf. This is how long the synopsis is...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is this a good synopsis for my story?.The gist of your story is about this: Why are you spinning around in worldbuilding? Giving a synopsis with worldbuilding is the best...