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Let me see your fiction first... oh, it's only a month old. It's too early to conclude engagement from such a young fiction. Keep up the...

I bet I'm older, and I got into a fist fight with a monkey a couple of weeks ago. Tell me about development 😁 Used to be a roofer for...

Heights, not falling, but just being high up causes my body to become violently sick.

I use a broomstick to cross all oceans, but since you mentioned me, Eldoria the White, I shall let you in on my hidden fear. Shhh, don't...

It's irrational if you look at it from the perspective of a magical girl with thousands of years of age without any development. :blob_melt:

Don't get me started on monkeys, i recently had to put mine down. So, is it irrational only because you're a witch? I feel like fear of...

I'm... intimidated isn't the right word here. its just the closest I can get to what I want. So, with that reservation that its...

As a white magical girl... I should be riding a broomstick, crossing the land at subsonic speed, dancing in the sky with the birds. But...

OK, first, you don't want a "good" synopsis unless the story is finished - you want an EFFECTIVE one, one that at least hints at your...

It seems that I am too late to write an evaluation since the author has quit writing. It is a difficult ask, since evaluating this asks...

I don't understand how the conclusion about stiff writing can jump to writing assisted by other writer to writing assisted by AI comes...

Sorry, dude. I'll pass on this fiction. Besides, she already got the detailed constructive feedback from him @MFontana

I already give a feedback so i cannot. But guys, please give this one a read. The premise and the setting is really good. cc @Eldoria

Thanks for taking the time to read and for giving a detailed feedback, you are right having 5 protagonist is ambitious Actually I...

I wouldn't worry too much about those detectors. They are still wildly inaccurate.