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Eldoria replied to the thread I finally hit 1K views on NeaNight!.I don't comment on works I haven't even read based solely on synopses and tags. But I once encountered an even more terrifying work: -
Eldoria reacted to Arakun10809's post in the thread Writing Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction? with
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A sarcastic dork who makes fun of a content creator's video script, interjecting herself when he lies to the audience. She also likes... -
Cheer up everyone. Get a drink or whatever your poison is. Turn off the screen if you want and come back later. You're the only one...
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Same, you lost me at loli. :blob_cookie: You don't give up, huh? :blob_cookie: Fighting! :blobtaco:
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Eldoria reacted to TheKillingAlice's post in the thread BE NOT AFRAID. I will read your chapters and give hopeless feedback. [Closed but if you send it, I might re-open] with Like.
I don't know, man. I see the memes and I need a review like this. I don't even know if the prologue is made for it or the protagonist is...
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Eldoria replied to the thread BE NOT AFRAID. I will read your chapters and give hopeless feedback. [Closed but if you send it, I might re-open].Okey. Please try mine, sis.
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CHAPTER 6 Me, @AliceMoonvale , @sleepandeatallday , @Pennywise , and the rest of the class walked together out of the school...
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Eldoria reacted to AstreiaNyx's post in the thread Writing Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction? with Love.
I let my characters narrate their scenes (limited 3rd person POV). The challenge is writing distinct voices since my cast is quite large...
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Eldoria reacted to Zagaroth's post in the thread Writing Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction? with Love.
Well, the narrator represents me to an extent, but also represents the PoV character. So even though I am writing in 3rd person, the...
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I thought you write a soccer story :blob_hmm: Thanks, will check it out Thank youuu. As expected from Eldoria senpai, instantly...
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Options: 1) Go the war commentator route - your character (or characters) narrate the story. Their awareness of the war grows as the...
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Eldoria reacted to Corty's post in the thread Writing Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction? with Like.
He is neutral, there to tell the story and has no relations to anybody because it's my disembodied voice.
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I write about fantasy & fun politics, yes. And fun politics is all about fun war, yes. And i'm still doing fine when the war is still...
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Eldoria replied to the thread The thing about WAR Novel.I've faced this dilemma. In an epic-scale conflict, you can't give an info dump through an omniscient narrator because the story would...
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Eldoria reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Writing Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction? with Love.
It varies. Kelly (Strange Awakening) is pretty much telling the reader what happened, kind of live, kind of past tense. Jack Diamond...