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My protagonist uses first-person POV so that readers can feel more emotionally connected to her personal view of the brutal war...

Thanks for the feedback. Thank you everyone for your feedback. I really appreciate it and will adjust my story accordingly. It’s nice to...

The central assumed conceit is that the story is being told by my MC after the fact, so everything is in past tense. Segments from his...

Altered One: The camera

Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction? Narrator is the 'unseen voice' who conveys the story to the reader/viewer through narration. An...

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:blob_dizzy: I often see this comment in the comment section of new fiction chapters.:blob_hmm_two:

Dude/sis... I'll be honest with you. It's not about taste, it's about how you visualize the scene from the first POV. As a reader, I...

I'm guessing I will line up to be destroyed. :blob_cookie: Please look at this one, kind Ma'am. I thank you very much for the work you...

Hmm. Let me start with what I dislike, quoted below: Yes. First paragraph. You hit me with a stock description. Then you redeemed...

You tried, you really did, but it wasn’t enough for me. The abstractness of the description was constant, consistent, persistent. It...

Thanks for the time and effort you took in writing this. I appreciate. I see reasons in your words, I have noted them, and will make...

Huh? Same, you lost me at loli.

Oh... I'm not a linguist. I'll skip this.

Same, you lost me at loli.