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Alice in wonderland is isekai too.

What I want to know is what will be the next popular over saturated market! If I find out now I can clout chase by preemptively writing...

I'd say a story with a simple, albeit clichéd, idea can be an amazing story if executed well. Conversely, I'd say a story with a...

I have my phone back you ebil woman :blob_hide::blob_thor::blob_party:, you cant keep me in the basement anymore.

I am not a writer, but am a reader. An early mistake? Authors not believing in themselves and stopping too soon! There is room to learn...

I would gladly make those mistakes again if I had to start from the beginning, as I like to think they helped me grow as a writer.

I've watched it over and over...:blob_aww: and still cry over Kaori's letter to Arima. :blob_teary:

Are you ready to rewatch some peak?

I agree. I suppose the more concise way to phrase what I was saying was that the OP needs to show *more*. I do see that the effort was...

Dude/sis... sorry, I stopped reading here. The reason? This is a moral lecture. Opening a scene with a moral lecture is the last option...

The OP is actually trying to convey the character's emotions through subtle emotion, using dialogue and body language (showing). That's...

Don't be afraid to make mistakes; humans learn from them. Don't worry too much about writing mistakes; every writer starts with a...

I regret asking. I thought my guy had a rough week, but apparently everyone here is running psychological torture facilities.

Eldoria :blob_melt:

Go to sleep, White. What should your magical girl name be?