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Let the melody of rain be a lullaby...

Probably. --- My main character is someone forced through circumstance and tragedy to become something she is not mentally capable of...

Well my character does, in fact, eat rusty nails for breakfast. So? With her *own* milk.

I feel like this thread is just a way to show off (character) trauma. It reminds me of the Spongebob Salty Spitoon meme...

Okay, that's fair. It will probably become clearer when more context is provided, but I don't want people to be put off before they even...

To be honest, I don't understand the plot and the characters. The wise man, stranger, young man and 'IT'.

Dude... this time I'm not judging your narrative quality objectively, I'm purely giving a preference assessment regarding the hook of...

The first POV inherently acts as an unreliable narrator. The narrative camera uses the character's perspective directly to perceive...

Reading fantasy and xianxia with tts feels so cringe:blob_cringe:

Next is... Mr. Harry 1. Title: Good, remind me of rpg games title 2. Cover: Awww, so cute and wholesome... please dont let this be a...

Thanks for your review. That is very encouraging. :blob_cookie: Now I know my lack of engagement is not due to poor craft, but the type...

The RR algorithm differs from SH. SH relies more on visibility and accessibility to drive engagement. RR, on the other hand, relies more...

I see so thats why. I understand thanks again.

Well, I just read your latest chapter in one go. My overall impression is that, as a first POV, your narrative successfully transformed...

@Eldoria I came with the new chapter 11. Is there anything wrong? I feel like its too long hahaha