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Glad I could guide ya on a path. Remember, just have fun with your writing; it's an enjoyable process because you also get to learn...

It's solid. The only suggestions I had, I believe I left for you in the critique I sent. If not, I certainly meant to, so I'll leave it...

Thank you for reading. This is actually helpful. Time to re-write. :)

Thank you for your feedback. :blob_salute:

Hello! Keep in mind, I'm not a very good writer, so take any of my advice with a bag of salt. With that out of the way: Just ditch the...

I tried my hand at horror in this chapter and want to see how I carried the eeriness and horror. ch4 Aegis exhaled as he prepared...

강력한 비판과 AI 활용에 대한 지적들에 감사합니다. 이전 답변에서도 말했지만, 전 영어로 소설을 직접 집필할 만큼의 실력이 없습니다. 그래서 한글로 쓴 원본을 AI로 번역 시켰고, 그대로 올리다 보니 결국 AI가 쓴 글이 되버렸네요. 번역기의...

Honestly, as an action chapter, this chapter is quite good. But as a horror chapter, it didn't give me (reader) goosebumps. I...

For her age, the fact that she genders the river, the sun, the dog, and constantly repeats her name while not understanding death...

Dang, that's great character's POV subtext. It's very clear and pointed out to the plot subtext. It would be great to see from her...

After reading your comprehensive feedback, I can say your answer is... Thank you for this excellent feedback. It gives me the...

I feel like she's around four or five years old... let's make her four and a half. Reason I say that is because of her being old enough...

This is nobledark, or rather, grim's fairy tale. A dark fantasy seen from a child's perspective.

Oh shit, what i understand about this, is it some kind of grimdark fantasy? The way she describe the 'Mr.Dog' dancing after her mom...

But hans, writers cant read its in the name. :blob_popcorn: