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Well, if what I provided is correct Long lines like these can be divided and shortened to give her a more childlike personality. Like--...
Mar 5, 2026
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Her actual age is a secret. But the age range you provided is correct.
Mar 5, 2026
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What is her exact age? Because a few lines(very few) feel a little mechanical for her age(since the whole chapter is in her pov).
Mar 5, 2026
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Thank for your feedback. Caelan is indeed a little girl (not a reincarnated immortal). I asked her age to gauge how accurately Caelan's...
Mar 5, 2026
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1. I feel like Caelan El Rose is around 5-9 years old, unless she is some weird immortal being that is trapped in eternal youth. 2. I...
Mar 5, 2026
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I wouldn’t say it’s hard. you just need to be a little childish, like writing overly wholesome lines. I’m not saying it’s easy either...
Mar 5, 2026
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Also, it depends on the child’s age. Nowadays, if you ask a 5 or a 6yo why they could jump higher on the Moon than on Earth, some can...
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Idk about this. Kids can sometimes surprise you with their intellect.
Mar 5, 2026
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Feedback for A Little Daughter Character Well, I rewrote one of my chapters with the first POV from a little girl's perspective. Here...
Mar 5, 2026
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I have no idea what happened, but we should all be writing anyway. That's why I have been less active in recent times. :blobreading:
Mar 5, 2026
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So 50.1% of the whole story being porn without a plot is no-no? Damn.
Mar 5, 2026
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After the Great ScribbleHub Purge of 2026, forum got lots of people complaining about their 404'd translations, and the fact that they...
Mar 5, 2026
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A nice piece of action with a little thriller, but not scary. Though this might just be me. Imo the 'horror' comes from the unknown and...
Mar 4, 2026
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I love that, and I love that you were able to experience that. Hoping maybe one of these days I can come across that experience for...
Mar 4, 2026
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Anyway, story of the day: I didn't come to work today. That is because, last night, someone burned something that when we woke up this...
Mar 4, 2026
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