As a new writer, I would appreciate your opinion on my first chapter
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/273539/this-game-is-just-absolutely-ridiculous/
Wrote that random title as I was uncertain whether anyone would watch it or not:ROFLMAO::blob_joy:. I just wanted someone to review my first chapter. As a new writer I am open to suggestions and criticisms. Whether the feedback is advice or plane hate, I shall accept it and try to learn...