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    Oh? You're Approaching This Thread?

    :blob_blank:Wow, those were some great advice. Really Appreciate it!:blob_aww:
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    Life is hard. But who says it cannot be harder?

    Life is hard. But who says it cannot be harder?
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    As a new writer, I would appreciate your opinion on my first chapter https://www.scribblehub.com/series/273539/this-game-is-just-absolutely-ridiculous/
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    Oh? You're Approaching This Thread?

    Thank for the feedback! It was helpful,(y) From now, I shall try to make my sentences feel more seamless
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    Oh? You're Approaching This Thread?

    Wrote that random title as I was uncertain whether anyone would watch it or not:ROFLMAO::blob_joy:. I just wanted someone to review my first chapter. As a new writer I am open to suggestions and criticisms. Whether the feedback is advice or plane hate, I shall accept it and try to learn...
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