Recent content by Daemeay

Thank you so much for your feedback! <3 I use the em dash (—) because it’s the standard for dialogue in French, so I’m veeeeery used to it, haha, for example: When I translated my French work, I didn’t realise it would feel so different in English, since I read a lot in English but never...

I do consent to these activities and agree to be a mature adult and not seek retribution for your thoughts haha ! It's a translation of my own work (in French, so I use the french standard for dialogue which I'll soon correct as it doesn't seem to be pleasing to english readers). It's still new...

Hi ! I just posted the first two chapters (one prologue and one chapter really) of my story. I already outlined the whole story and I would like feedback on the first chapters to improve my writings as I go. Be brutally honest (but not mean please, I'm a softie). Please bear in mind I'm not a...

Hi ! I'd love to have your feedback on the first chapters of my story (just the prologue if you can't read both ofc) c: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2255710/dulmhak/