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    Trigger Warning or Content Warning or Mature Genre?

    Two actually, one in description and the other in tags.
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Hey, roast my novel too! Here is the link B*stard of Abaddon.
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    I don't want to say it, Ain't no party like- 🥳🥳
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    How old are you? :unsure:
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    Hey, since I did not mention the link last time. Here it is, B*stard of Abaddon. I have to warn you, there are a few sensitive themes.
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]

    Okay here you go. B*stard of abaddon. :s_smile:
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]

    Can i come for round 2? I changed quite a few things so if you are okay with it I'll leave my revamped novel.
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    Need help with action scenes.

    How Sweet of you. :blob_aww:
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    Need help with action scenes.

    U meant to reply to my reply or pancakes reply?
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    Need help with action scenes.

    I do read, but i want to know where I stand in terms of writing action.
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    Need help with action scenes.

    Should I delete it now?
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    Need help with action scenes.

    I wrote an entire chapter with an action scene, but I can't say if it is slow, fast, good, bad. I would appreciate if somebody took a look at it say what's bad and can be fixed.
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    If you have time, can you please take a look at my book?

    Okay, I'll move forward with the 18th chapter then, thank you for your suggestions. :blob_melt: It was a design choice, my bad. I made the asterisk to look more like the horns of MC.
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    If you have time, can you please take a look at my book?

    My original plan was this, but a sharp drop in readers in chapter 2 made me question my choice of character switch. I felt that it was taking away the mystery and driving the plot away. That is why I've re-written 2,3 chatpers. Thank you for replying. Liberator Orc.
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    If you have time, can you please take a look at my book?

    Okay, thank you for replying. :s_smile:
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