Recent content by c37

I am much better at line art than colouring, so i will try completing this with a pencil.

Hey, thank you for reading. It did not feel like a rant; it was helpful in providing more insight into horror. I've edited according to the suggestions you have given, focusing more on the uneasy part and reducing interruptions. And I also reduced the lore information to build the mystery.

Sorry to shatter your dreams, but I suck at adding colours. :,)

Ofc the artwork is not finished yet

Thank you, your edits actually increased the horror parts of the chapter. I'll follow your suggestion.

Obviously, repeating it every once in a while is kind of insulting to the actual victims (not blaming the author).

Thank you, I've actually edited it with suggestions @Eldoria, can you check that out too?

How did this feedback thread turn into a debate thread?

imagination.exe stopped working x_x

An evil clone?

I wouldn't call my hero righteous, but I want him to suffer so that when he comes out and takes revenge, it feels worth it.

Hey eldoria! edited a few things as you said, I hoped I added that eeriness. “The Ashen chapel was once a beautiful monument of the Pitt,” Aegis let out a breath and prepared himself. He rubbed his palms as the coldness brushed his skin. “Citizens of the Pitt showed their gratitude to the Arch...

Ehhh😅 maybe let's not go there? I agree with the rest of your points though.

Okay, I think this approach will be better. Thanks for the suggestion.

Aren't you very encouraging?