I wrote an entire chapter with an action scene, but I can't say if it is slow, fast, good, bad. I would appreciate if somebody took a look at it say what's bad and can be fixed.
Okay, I'll move forward with the 18th chapter then, thank you for your suggestions. :blob_melt:
It was a design choice, my bad. I made the asterisk to look more like the horns of MC.
My original plan was this, but a sharp drop in readers in chapter 2 made me question my choice of character switch. I felt that it was taking away the mystery and driving the plot away. That is why I've re-written 2,3 chatpers. Thank you for replying. Liberator Orc.