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the LN readers saying that Tiara Basori is the leading one amongst them. idk she's kinda mid but it's just my opinion.

honestly this is one of the few high-school character in a rom-com anime that i personally liked. he's not some dense mc and very observant to the things that happening around him. him and my cutiepie yanami-san are a perfect partners in crime HAHAHAHA!

Well-said! Thank you! :blob_salute: Regarding your constructive criticism, yeah, their agreement is kind of rushed. But I explained it on later chapter. Here, it said: I already established a backstory (which I moved in future chapters) and apparently, Reika is outgoing with a lot of friends...

Just for the record, yes, I wrote my story to "tell" more than to "show," I know that, and I will say sorry in advance if that bothers you. I just want to ask about my character's personality, judgement, and morals, if they're likeable or not. And if you had time, you can add advice on how to...

almost all of Er Gen works is a masterpiece; that's the irrefutable fact. one of my personal fave would be ISSTH. I didn't read his other works but almost those who read it said they're great.

one of the reason why I improve my digital art skills. i know 70-80% that sees ai-generated images would talk shit to you HAHAHAAH. naw bro not the nu-GOAT-mizu avatar! ❤️💙 elite ball knowledge... heck yeah!

it's a given though. new locations and things should be described by sensory details. but I think what don't really mattered was things that was already established by earlier chapters, or things that had zero impact to the plot or character. mine's that whenever that thing or place was already...

I've examined their works and it shows that they tend to "show" more rather than telling. If possible, I like to study works which had more "telling" but not to the point that it loses reeader's interest, since JP LN readers are my target... this actually makes sense. hm, based on what you're...

Then, in all those JP Light Novels you've read, they're inclined more on "telling"? My goal is to actually write a Light Novel and I feel like the "showing" part should be minimal (sorry, my source materials is few). Mine was, in fast-paced scenes (fights, intensive movements, heavy...

HAHAHAHA yeah my first JP LN is also Overlord! Maybe my narrative style got influenced because of that. I noticed it way back that the story got focused on a grand scale rather than minute details like characters and people. Anyways, thanks for the insight!

I thought it should be on author's section because it involves about "writing" mistakes. should I move it?

From what I've gathered through various forums (especially in JP ones) telling the narrative is preferred with a little side of showing. I researched it further and found that they tend to focus more on plot points, world building, and with a little addition to "like" faster updates. Is there...

Hi everyone! Would you mind giving my book a read and give a constructive feedback? If you enjoy it, I'd really appreciate your support to help it reach more readers! You can leave a review, too...

I am open for commission. it depends on what kind you want (book cover, character illustration) as long as the price are negotiable. I suck at making bg so most likely I only accept works with minimal to no bg details/works. cash first before i submit the finish product (ofc it's alr done) btw...

i do like the lighting of the old one, especially how the two MC's were larger than the new one.